Tomoe the chosen one
by Annie Silvestor/Female Battousai

"DON'T STEAL MY NAME!"


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Kenshin was washing the clothes early on a beautiful,Saturday morning, he had been so indulged that never had times for fun and games.Kaoru was washing the dishes and Sano and Yahiko were playing on the porch,they often neglected strangers who came to the dojo and made Kaoru stop her work for their needs and travellers.This one morning a curse would sweep the Earth and reign terror piercing to the heart of Kaoru,she would lose the reason to live,and her reason to decay on loving a heart that doesn't know how to return soft,tender,trusted love back to her."Hello,can you help me?",a woman of 166cm ,midnight blue hair and is miss coldness to Sano and Yahiko.She was slender but ice-cold,"Jo-chan,somebody is outside,come quickily!",Sano shouted,Koaru ran outside and felt a strange feeling of cold ice on her spine creeping up to her heart.Kaoru walked cautiousily and exclaimed "can i help you?",the woman said "yes,i'm looking for Kenshin Himura,is he present at your delapidated dojo",Kaoru sweet with whatever circumstancers said"aparently he is at this unfortunate dojo!".The woman peered Kaoru in the eye,she looked full of pain and mysery, it made Kaoru's heart shatter into a million define pieces;Kaoru then ran to Kenshin,she said"Kenshin there's a woman awaiting you outside!",Kenshin smiled unaware and told Kaoru to tell her he would be with her in a giefy.Kaoru ran outside and said "Kenshin would be with you in a......!","i heard" the woman replied.Kenshin then came outside and looked at the woman, his eyes reflected him back to the days of Hitokori Battousai and journied him to hell and to happiness,he stood frightened,amazed and blanking every person around him,it was his heart,happiness, reason for stop killing and for him to be a wanderer.She said "hello,Kenshin how are you !",and ran to him,he ran and fell in her arms,it was his Tomoe.He beemed back into the trans called life.He then saw Koaru's face it was as cold as ice,pale as death and she stood astonished like a statue,her heart had lost it's reason to continue to live and go further,her breath was deep and tears of arrows and spears of pain trickled down her smooth,pale,porcelain,motionless face.She showed no statement and left without indication but had a trail of pain that could be felt like an earthquake.Kenshin was amazed at her reactions,she was as cool as a cucumber and as quiet as a mouse.Kenshin then said everyone this is my wife Tomoe Yukishiro or Himura.Kaoru stopped and everyone looked at her,she then swept her tears ashore and coughed with alot of pain.She opened the door and proceeded,then closed the door.Kenshin ran to Kaoru and stopped her,he held her by the arms in a rough and curious way and said "Kaoru what's wrong ?",she looked at him and said"fai..cough,cough,cough..th!",she came out his walls and grew invincible feelings to kill herself.Kaoru was a volcanio in similiar aspects,she felt she could explode with tears ensuring her extreme sadness and discomfort.These tears would eventually be called "HELL TEARS":-which were tears of angar,insecurity,frustration and intense mutilizing pain.That night Kaoru awoke and realized her throat was hoarse,she then went to the kitchen picked up a knife and went on the porch.She sat strong with the spirit of hope to live as her father and she would test the knife true accuracy on her neck that she would slit.Luckily Sano was there and with extreme precession he flicked the knife out of her hands,"what the hell is wrong with you!",he said,she turned away and said "faith","huh,i didn't catch you on that!",she dismantled herself from Sano and would try the next day. {Next Morning}_"Kaoru wake up,were'e going to the carnival parade,don't tell me you forgot!"Yahiko shouted,"i'm <cough>not<cough,cough,cough>go..ing!" she exclaimed,"what,you don't mess it each and every year and all of a sudden you wanna mess it,your'e odd girl,very!",she got up with her hair covering her eyes and said "Yahiko,i'm not your'e stinking sister and don't push your luck,you'r punk,now get out my room, freak of nature",he with tears in his eyes told Megumi,Kaoru was alittle strange that morning ,Megumi checked Kaoru,and realized she was burning up with fever and had a terrible case of the virus.Megumi told everyone the unfortunate news.Kenshin was heart-broken,but Tomoe made Kenshin be his sheath that she was along time ago.Tomoe had something she needed to say and it was ,that though Kenshin seemed to have killed her as Battousai a man called Ravi Swashichan,revived her with "vodo,white magic and speacial incantations".It was not only extremely strange,but techinically amazing and she said this on her first arrival.Kaoru in her mind said he could of let that dog die,big time.Kaoru soon after decided to take extreme proportions of stress.Tomoe and Kaoru were the rivals of Kenshin's heart,and though Kaoru eyes could be seen from the naked eye as blood shed red it pierces her internally to know Kenshin has forgotten the blue eyes beautiful china doll with the heart as warm as the mid-summer's night.Kaoru had now try to slaughter herself by suffication,she infact was desparate to die,though Kenshin still had enormous amount of fellings for Kaoru,it was clearly blind to see this love converging.She always thought that Tomoe had the edge but faith shall intercept.Yahiko saw Kaoru's diabolical plan being inaugurated that he slammed her head with his shinnai,which bled lavishily.She awoke in her room and feeling the strength fading from her fingers ;she got up, ran through the dojo,through the courthyard and through the forest where she saw demons of her inner true darkness,they chanted her name and she hallucinated them.As running as fast as a deer her kimono was in shreds,it was cut by the long daggers of grass that seem to cut her enjoyably all over the body.She then stopped and saw the reason to take life from her away,it was Kenshin and Tomoe together with his arms around her waist looking romantically vicious into one another's eyes under the falling untimid rain.Then Kenshin and Tomoe hugged and lean each other's faces onto one another's,the rain subdued and so did Kaoru's pulse,however Kenshin placed his sword on the ground and Kaoru stealthly stole the katana she then picked up herself and ran silentily throw the forest, falling several times with the idea of death striking her like bullets,she then made herself to the dojo,she came to the porch and walked slowily,sobbing to fulfil her destiny, "DEATH",she then placed herself in Kenshin's room that scampered spirits of horror in her.She drew the katana and made a huge "x" on the wall then proceeded with the horrific act,she then placed infinite {multiply by ,(x)} infinite "x's" on her skin,eventually she was covered in blood ,in addition her chest had a huge "x" and took the blood and filled it in the gap of the huge "x" on the wall,and with despair she slitted her throat,with the little strength remaining she stabbed herself in the heart where she pinned herself on the wall where the huge "x" meet at four 90 degrees diagionally intersecting.Tomoe and Kenshin then came home the following morning,Tomoe was going to make breakfast and Kenshin going to change into a new suit of clothes,he then opened the door and there a cold chill ran up his spine and he fell on the floor in utter shock,Kenshin lost all common sense and hope,his Kaoru had died embracing the symbol of "x" as Battousai on her.Kenshin lost his innocence,motivation,refuge over darkness,or all together his incandescent sun in his life,she was still his light and hope to make life feel bonded for,but now her bright,vibrant,radiant, sky blue,eyes were shut with stress and her face uncontented and looked forsaken from love.Though her young,fresh,stained beauty face was screaming this out it was in fact she wrote "i killed myself because Kenshin has forgotten me and my worth!",the truth wasn't far it was engraved on her chest next to the huge "x".Kenshin had no reason to enjoy what he had done,how he could of loved Tomoe, after Kaoru sacrifice her soul and everything for him ,Kenshin real reason for life was dead,Kenshin stopped eating,he stopped looking at Tomoe,never spoke ,the insanity had posessed him that he killed himself holding Kaoru's head engraving on his chest "i love you Kaoru,more than anyone,forgive me and may we be together forever!".These words claimed a significant meaning that Kaoru always had the upper hand,she was always cared for,but Kenshin had let her go to soon before she realized that he was a fool.

SUBJECT:I AM NOT A LUNATIC FAN OVER KENSHIN SO DON'T "RAVE AND RANT" ABOUT IT,KAORU AND TOMOE FANS I AM BOTH, BUT I HAVE SOME MORE CARE FOR KAORU ,SHE WAS THE ONE WHO ACCEPTED HIM AS BATTOUSAI AND THE ROROUNI AND MADE HIM REACH LIFE AND HIS INNOCENCE ,GAVE HIM A FAMILY,PLACE TO STAY AND A PLACE WHERE KAMIYA KAORU COULD LOVE HIM.I THOUGHT TOMOE IS TALENTED LIKE KAORU BUT I WANTED THIS STORY TO INTRODUCE HOW TO REALLY SEE YOUR LOVERS AND NEVER TAKE THEM FOR GRANTED, REACH THE CARE OF THOSE WHO WILL WAIT ALL OF THEIR LIVES FOR YOU BUT WHAT CAN YOU DO WHEN YOU STOP LOVING THEM,"DON'T CRY" THATS WHAT YOU CHOSE;ANYWAYS TOMOE IS SAID TO MAKE KAORU ANGRY BUT DOES MORE THAN THAT AND TOMOE IS REUNITED WITH KENSHIN,FOR THE WHILE, ATLEAST.
SONGS:
A)Tactics (BEGINNING)
B)Departure (MIDDLE)
c)Sekihoutaitheme (ENDING)
this is my story hope you enjoyed it